Art considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. Howeve,r these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business.
Art is main aspect of culture and tradition of every country over the world. However, nowadays more people neglecting it, by giving more attention to science, technology and business due to possibilities to achieve goals and earn money faster. As a result, there must to be held a lot of measures to increase people’s interest in art, such as governmental support, giving more attention to works of younger generation of artists. Teaching understanding of art and giving scholarships.
As real life shows there are a lot of benefits and opportunities for people who choose more fruitful fields such as technology, science or business. For instant, List of richest people in the world which provided by Forbes, scientist who won the Nobile Peace Prize where you can find very few representatives of art who is still alive, mostly they got recognition after death. As a result interest in are decreasing, except those which leads to extinction of cultures, traditions, eventually languages and nations, living poor diversity of countries and cultures.
To avoid this disaster government of each country must fund range of comprehensive programs. For the existing representatives of modern art state average salaries or help to sell their works or use their service. Also, teach young generation not only creating art, also understanding of art in main institute of education as well providing scholarships. Provide competitions between artists compare their work with greatest artists of past. Then encourage them by selling their work in the auctions, which can give great income. Give them freedom to represent their work they wish. For example, French artist who leaves wise messages as Arabic calligraphy on the walls of hoses all over the world, which provide nice view to the house, apart from street art. In addition gives wise advice and remains day after day.
In conclusion, art is necessity of our culture, country and soul. It is what segregate one nation from other, such as birthmark. So we must attract peoples attention to save, appreciate and develop.
- Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the individual to protect themselves. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 56
- Some people think that women are generally more peaceful than men as their characters are naturally nurturing than agressive. To what extent do you agree? 56
- Art considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. Howeve,r these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...d earn money faster. As a result, there must to be held a lot of measures to increase p...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the richest'.
Suggestion: of the richest
... science or business. For instant, List of richest people in the world which provided by F...
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Line 5, column 411, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the greatest'.
Suggestion: with the greatest
...ions between artists compare their work with greatest artists of past. Then encourage them by...
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Line 5, column 763, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...to the house, apart from street art. In addition gives wise advice and remains day after...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, then, well, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23053892216 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89038790023 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62874251497 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5246857673 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0555555556 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200248008473 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614346150828 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394293185279 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113874408905 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355992901801 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.