Some people think that women are generally more peaceful than men as their characters are naturally nurturing than agressive. To what extent do you agree?
It is believed that due to their birth-giving, caring and educating predestination, females are more loyal and friendly compared to men whose role is protection, hunting and supplying, which lead to an aggressive behavior. In my opinion, women are gentle, loyal and peaceful than men who usually get more brutal character innate, but there can be exceptions to these rules.
In ideal ladies owing to their physical appearance heath and tenderness are peaceful and men aggressive, competitive and boisterous, that’s why, unfortunately, there are more men in prison comparing to the woman, and it is obvious that there are more conflicts between men rather than women. However, as we go through life we can see absolutely different representatives both sexes. I think these phenomena happen in the result of mistakes in bringing up, traditions and circumstances of their lives. For instance, I have met who were similar to men in their behavior, speech and even appearance, as a result, of difficulties in their lives choosing the profession, environment where girls were brought up with more contact with opposite sex or with people who were not able to show the right model of a female. So, these women behave as men ad they can have similar characteristics. In addition men, vice versa, clear picture of this phenomena can be seen in Thailand, where traditionally in family daughters are preferable compared to boys, as an evidence to these in my visit to Thailand I have observed several situations when men demonstrate inconvenient, gentle and undetermined characters.
In conclusion, even if tremendous amount women represent friendly, peaceful and helpful behavior apart from men who have opposite personalities there are still of some representatives who show an exception.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, apart from, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30633802817 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16729804868 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609154929577 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.7124349667 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.444444444 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5555555556 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1111111111 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227694544301 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933286645667 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700220400268 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151170623563 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442505408147 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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