Artist is the one who exhibits creativity. Artist can be a dancer, Singers, painters, comedians, etcetera. Artist is the person who has art of portraying things in a creative way. For example, We all do a little bit of painting. But the one who can fill emotions, joy, happiness, sadness or some kind of feeling is an artist and therefore he is called as painter.
I truly support this notion that artist needs certain amount of freedom so that they can portray their creativity without any fear which will eventually help them to develop their creativity. When we say “certain” amount of freedom it depicts some restrictions in their thoughts. It’s even important to have some restrictions so that the art is within the countries rules and regulation. And if it’s within the framed guideline, artist will not fall into trap of any litigation. In many countries people do not have freedom to raise their voice and are obliged to act within the rules framed on them. Therefore, artist should respect the sentiments of their people and society which can be possible only if there is some amount of restriction.
However, Few people think that artists should have total freedom. This is only possible in the country which has given all sorts of freedom to its citizen. As in case of India, Artist in country like India are free and are not bound. For example, many comedians imitate even the prime minister of India who is the most powerful man of the country. In many dance forms, Dancers shows injustice faced by molested girls. Debaters can speak about topics like sex, rape and menstrual cycle without any hesitation. Artist when come up with something unique, their thoughts and ideas are welcomed in country like India and it gives rise to ”thinking out of the box” Which will ultimately give a boost in the thinking of the people of the society. Therefore, I believe that artists are also indirectly doing good for the upliftment in thoughts and thinking of the people in the society.
Thus, in a Nutshell and to conclude I would sum it up by saying that artist is the one who can perform within the guidelines framed. They can make the best use of whatever freedom they have. Last but not the least, it’s truly said that “the one who can make the best out of worst is an artist”.
- The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words 73
- Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some People Think That Public Health Is A Responsibility Of The Government, While Others Believe That Individuals Should Be Responsible For Their Own Health. Discuss Both These Views And Give Your Own Opinion. 92
- Some people say that what children watch influences their behavior. Others believe the amount of time they spend on television influences their behavior most. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Singers, painters, comedians, etcetera. Artist is the person who has art of port...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ngers, painters, comedians, etcetera. Artist is the person who has art of portraying...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a creative way" with adverb for "creative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...person who has art of portraying things in a creative way. For example, We all do a little bit of...
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Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... creative way. For example, We all do a little bit of painting. But the one who can fill e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1939.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82338308458 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64999172212 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502487562189 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1646576922 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1363636364 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95454545455 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353866037664 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108038596825 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925647073507 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20348034266 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971927498652 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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