Being a celebrity – such as a famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Almost every one of us dreams about being renowned and popular, like a famous superstar or sports figure. The general apprehension is that they have all a man should have in life. When they are on the red carpet they look like they do not have difficulties and their lives seem to fit perfect. It appears that the grass is always greener on the other side of the fence. Everything has its price. The truth is that there are as many drawbacks or downsides of being a luminary as there are the number of advantages.
First of all, celebrities are comparatively affluent than the average Joe. A celebrity can earn a lot of money, which itself is a great boon. They can afford luxurious homes and cars, fancy gifts and gorgeous cloths, some feel fortunate enough to share their wealth with the less fortunate. A good example here is Madonna, the American pop icon. She founded Raising Malawi, a non-profit organization that supports community-based organizations that provide vulnerable children and caregivers with nutritious food, proper clothing, and formal education and so on. Secondly, many opportunities arise when a person becomes famous. Whatever they do in the film industry they get a bunch of opportunities, like an ambassador or spokesperson for brands. Take people like Genesis Rodriguez made her red carpet debut as a new ambassador for L’Oreal Paris USA at the recent 15th Annual Latin Grammy Awards in Las Vegas. In addition, many celebrities are becoming business tycoon after and while they have stardom. And last but not least, very often celebrities belong a position about which a lay man can never think of. Just think of Angelina Jolie, she has achieved a fame which an ordinary woman can never touch the boundary. Though, both belong to the same gender, the acceptance makes an obvious difference.
On the flip side, the celebrities have no privacy in the most cases. If Demi Moor and her beau go for a long drive, the whole world will about it. Lack of privacy is one of the biggest handicaps of being a celebrity. Similarly, they are being judged constantly on their personality, habit and a lot more. Reading rude, insulting, derogatory, nasty and lies about one’s own self is a part and parcel of a famous film star’s daily routine. Imagine how embarrassing it would be if a tabloid published your hidden affair. Furthermore, a famous person cannot do things that an ordinary person can easily. They live in their secluded world. Even they cannot go for shopping to the super market, take a walk, chilling with friends at the park or having dinner with family at the local restaurant.
In brief, being famous has both bad and good sides. Despite of negative sides, I firmly believe that fame and fortune are the matchless factors in the life of a celebrity. Being a celebrity is endowed with more advantages compared to its difficulties.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, while, in addition, in brief, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2402.0 1615.20841683 149% => OK
No of words: 489.0 315.596192385 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91206543967 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73352338256 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 289.0 176.041082164 164% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59100204499 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 769.5 506.74238477 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2749577557 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0666666667 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185054439382 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047644759419 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515585601937 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122669749841 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404519952883 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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