Being a celebrity- such as a famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
India is a country where people treat films and sports as two religions which are followed by all irrespective of their communal beliefs. The film stars and sports personalities are often considered celebrities and will be followed closely.
I believe being a celebrity will give you more advantages than the problems. You will get the attention from the broadcasting companies, business giants and as well as common people daily and mainly the media will follow you wherever you go and write up their stories on you and publishes them to increase their TRP ratings. Business companies will try to utilize your services in endorsing their products, in return you will be given more money than that of you get by doing a film or playing a match. There is no much physical effort required and also the work will be done in a day or two unlike the regular films or matches. Even while traveling you will be given the first priority in getting your tickets booked or getting the seats you wanted. This will happen in the government organizations as well as private ones.
To get all these, you have to sacrifice somethings in return which include your privacy. Your life will be an open book where anyone can peek in and judge you the way you are. And second thing is respect. The very same people who praised you for your success will pelt stones on you when you disappoint them. Many such incidents are being happened lately. One such incident is when India failed to qualify for the further rounds in cricket world cup, so many people gathered outside the cricketers houses and protests has been organized at an astonishing level.
But people who want to become film stars or sports celebrities, should have that patience and confidence on them so that they can face these type of situations in day to day life. After all the main reason to enter these glittery fields is to get the attention and time from the people and they are getting that right.
Hold on to your nerves, work hard and be a superstar that you always dreamed of.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 513, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ing a film or playing a match. There is no much physical effort required and also ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, well, while, after all, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73259052925 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4092308316 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548746518106 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9156557114 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9411764706 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1176470588 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224718069199 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086396742382 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766510537046 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123315164127 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059787820821 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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