Being a celebrity-such as a famous film star or sports personality-brings problem as well as benefits.
Do you think that bring a celebrity brings more benefits or more problem?
Almost everything has two sides-positive and negative; being a famous person is not a separate thing. Celebrities want to be noticed in start, once achieved the desired popularity started to avoid the crowd attention. In this essay, I will discuss these conundrums.
To start with, what are the drawbacks of being popular? Well, first of all, privacy is compromised because of notability. For example, if he/she goes out for a meal with his/her family, close friends or other celebrities than this will be forecasted on the newspapers, news channels, internet etc. On the social media writers, curators and criticizers criticizes on their meeting whether they had to meet or not; what was they wearing; what is the impact of that catch up on their career. To add, they will be surrounded by fans in malls, eating and relaxing areas to get autograph.
On the other side, what are the plus points of popularity? First, you have plethora of money to live a luxurious life, for instance, they can buy any branded products like Gucci bags, Sephora make up, Channel sandals. Furthermore, they don’t have to wait for monthly income to do their important task or eat outside. In addition, the hastle of travelling in local rickshaw, bus, van are not for them, private cars are available 24/7 for them even for grocery shopping. Second, first row seats are available for them to any thrust as, cinema, restaurant, cafe or any playground. Third, to levitate the income for charity, authorities publicised the event by informing them that a renowned guest will come to address and listen to people.
In the nutshell, although, fame steal your privacy but there are more pros you can get from your fame like money, attention of people, luxurious lifestyle, being preferred in any restaurant, cafe and shows. Moreover, presence of a personality grab more attention of people to raise money for charity. I think pros of being popular outweigh the cons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Sephora) must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...anded products like Gucci bags, Sephora make up, Channel sandals. Furthermore, they ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, third, well, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, first of all, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00615384615 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68073292107 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9010786162 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7058823529 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64705882353 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0973863001613 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332234187883 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031308283121 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687506647646 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385583068244 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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