On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manger of your insurance company. In your letter
Describe the item you lost
Explain how you lost it
Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
I am writing to you inform about the misplacement of my precious watch. It is a gold plated RADO model no.xxxxx with a minor scratch on the back of the dial in the left deeper corner.
Let me explain my situation in detail. Me and my childhood friend met for a dinner in a restaurant, there was an incident of mishandled curry bowl, it was all over the place including my clothes and hands. So, a stressed out situation occur and I rushed to the rest room to wash out any debris from my wearings. Unfortunately, I took off my watch to clean it with water as it was waterproof and put on the shelf to drying out my dress. Therefore, forgot to take it from there, when I came home than realized that my wrist was empty. I asked to the restaurant manager but his staff denied seeing any belonging of the customer tonight. It might be stolen by other customer or anyone else.
Could you tell me the procedure to claim my insurance money to buy a same new watch or you can call the company to order a new piece. Because it was a graduation gift from my parents and I do not want to upset them by telling them about this ramification.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours affectionately,
Arfa Jabeen
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... the misplacement of my precious watch. Its a gold plated RADO model no.xxxxx with ...
^^^
Line 2, column 371, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: waterproof
... watch to clean it with water as it was water proof ultimately put on the shelf and drying ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 559, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'denied seeing'.
Suggestion: denied seeing
...to the restaurant manager but his staff denied to see any belonging of the customer tonight. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...a graduation gift from my parents and I dont want to upset them. Looking forward to...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31904761905 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49907465868 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657142857143 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3384498212 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.7857142857 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.21428571429 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0909362928286 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422254171375 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581430532639 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803315224866 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048984206607 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... the misplacement of my precious watch. Its a gold plated RADO model no.xxxxx with ...
^^^
Line 2, column 371, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: waterproof
... watch to clean it with water as it was water proof ultimately put on the shelf and drying ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 559, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'denied seeing'.
Suggestion: denied seeing
...to the restaurant manager but his staff denied to see any belonging of the customer tonight. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...a graduation gift from my parents and I dont want to upset them. Looking forward to...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31904761905 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49907465868 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657142857143 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3384498212 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.7857142857 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.21428571429 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0909362928286 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422254171375 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581430532639 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803315224866 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048984206607 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.