Benefits and disadvantages of Facebook.
Facebook is a very popular social networking app in today's times. In this essay I will discuss the Positives and the Negatives of it.
Facebook has humongous success in young generation because of its simple interface. It allows us to search and reconnect our long-lost friends from any part of the world in just a single click. In our busy schedules, Facebook is a strong medium to be in touch to all the pals, family members and acquaintances. Many people, specially the college students use Facebook chat for group discussions while businessmen use for small meetings. You can sell or buy products or services through Facebook thus it increases the possibilities of earning money online. Facebook is a better source of information and latest news, you can always stay updated and likely not to miss a single update.
But like every coin has a second side, FB too has other side of flaws. I have read in the newspaper, that spending more time on FB can lead you to the addiction and then it may affect your mental peace. Disorders like Insomnia, Lack of concentration, Poor digestion, etc may hamper your life balance. People get antisocial and it causes many relationship problems. Another drawback of fb is Identity theft. Personal details like name, age, e-mail, phone numbers are at high risk and it could get misused. Pornography is the biggest disadvantage of FB, which enables you to download pornographic pictures and videos. Watching such scandalous material can create havoc in children's, teenager's or social lives of adults.
Undoubtedly, Facebook is helpful and useful tool when used wisely but extremely harmful and dangerous if not used sensibly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, so, then, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07971014493 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79099355652 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688405797101 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3303474575 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.4705882353 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52941176471 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162852079018 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430213740883 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467927095547 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863689368957 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461040202044 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.