The best way to resolve the international environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
International expert proposed many ways to tackle the global environmental issue. while raising fuel prices is a great measure to fight climate change, i disagree that it would be the best solution to alleviate.
That increasing the cost of fuel is an effective way to limit cars use that has lead to certain environmental benefits. Fewer cars use mean that the emissions to the atmosphere was reduced, thus It slowing the process of global warming. Furthermore, the depletion of natural resources is also controlled by less reliance on fuel. That reducing dependence on fuel will reduce demand and thus reduce exploitation of this resource. As a consequence, i believe that international bodies should exert pressure on countries to raise fuel prices.
However i would argue that there are more effective ways. Firstly, from the perspective of transport policy, introducing restrictions on the use of private vehicles must be high on the government agenda in all countries. If car and motorbike were difficult, more people would turn to use public transport. Secondly, government must allocate resources to development of alternative energy resources to power motor vehicles and machinery used in factory production. Finally to achieve sustainable development, international cooperation to share scientific knowledge and advances in technology should a top priority. This would range across issues such as the exploitation of renewable energy, halting the spread of deserts.
While raising the fuel prices would has some effect on alleviate global issues, I believe that there are more effective ways to do this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45019920319 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0448674712 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609561752988 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3657443082 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.7142857143 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170385628028 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560635661945 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665208494949 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115521367628 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670344214907 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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