In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with
other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes
the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from
your own knowledge or experience.
One of the most challenging problems of today's society is the question who should be responsible for our old people. It's not only a financial problem but also a question of the system we want our society to have. In my essay I would like to four different models.
Firstly, the company can be responsible for their retired employees. For this reason a special fund could be established. The advantage of this model is, if you belief in the capitalist system, that it should be the cheapest solution and possible problem is that the companies might have competition disadvantage due to higher staff costs.
A second solution is that the government has to sole the responsibility for the old people's case. It can finance this with it's tax incomes. Actually, this is the most democratic model since everyone gets as much money as he or she needs. Unfortunetly, as the present situation in our country shows, this solution seems not to work very well. The government can no longer afford supporting all the old people.
Another way of solving this problem is to give back the responsibility to the individual. That means that everybody has to save money during their working life for the time after their retirement. This seems to be not a very fair model because their will certainty exist people who can't afford to save part of their salary. In this case the government would have to care for them.
A last solution is to o back to the old model of the big family who cares for all their members. I don't think this is possible in our days society because the family structures have so much changed.
To sum up I have to admit that I can't find a really goof solution for this problem. All models have advantages and disadvantages. Certainly we have to think about this topic much more in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: BELIEF_BELIEVE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'believe' (verb) instead of belief (noun)?
Suggestion: believe
... The advantage of this model is, if you belief in the capitalist system, that it shoul...
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Line 5, column 379, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to support'.
Suggestion: to support
...ll. The government can no longer afford supporting all the old people. Another way of s...
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Line 7, column 283, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e their will certainty exist people who cant afford to save part of their salary. In...
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Line 9, column 100, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...mily who cares for all their members. I dont think this is possible in our days soci...
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Line 11, column 34, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ed. To sum up I have to admit that I cant find a really goof solution for this pr...
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Line 11, column 44, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('really') instead an adjective, or a noun ('goof') instead of another adjective.
...sum up I have to admit that I cant find a really goof solution for this problem. All models h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, so, well, as to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6802507837 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64239708595 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520376175549 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0701983184 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.65 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.95 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270646142991 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902460329696 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729677818898 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146395123006 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541125108522 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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