In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them.
Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the
family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from
your own knowledge or experience.
Life is cruel, and when a human gets old, she becomes a burden on her own family. In English countries, a trend to go in old houses when you get into a certain age is common so that medical staff like nurses take care of them to stay in pink. But here is a question, who should bear the expenses of these peoples? Is that the government or that particular person's family? In this essay, I will try to answer these questions.
On the one hand, what would happen if the family takes responsibility for their parents? First of all, you should never let go your precious older family members but if an old person chooses to go out and overcome your difficulties to take care of her. It will be generous for you to pay for her food and shelter because our parents are the one who gave us shadow in the sunny days unreluctantly. So that you can flourish and make unbeatable achievements. In this way, they can feel secure and know that they can always return home if they want to.
On the other hand, the government is also responsible for its citizens in many ways. First, a person devotes her whole life to fulfil her duties in the commencement of new developments for their country. Second, they have the right to gain respect in terms of financial assistance to live their last years of life peacefully. Because not everyone has her family to assist her in her retired life.
In a nutshell, if a family is incapable of helping their older physically, then they have to pay for all the expenditures. But there is no doubt that the government should contribute to their citizens’ retirement life for their food and, etc. But first, it is the responsibility of a family member to give financial or emotional assistance to their elders.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 357, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... that the government or that particular persons family? In this essay, I will try to an...
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Line 5, column 327, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ve their last years of life peacefully. Because not everyone has her family to assist h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, no doubt, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54777070064 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64242176702 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557324840764 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1355936571 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315160888223 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902647903375 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457763641918 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182929249159 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685237148015 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.