In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with
other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes
the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
We should believe in the circle of life which implies that parents take care of kids when they are young and in return the children take care of parents when they become older. In my opinion, the family should be responsible for taking care of the aged members instead of the government.
A family is what everyone looks upon when in dire need and not the government. We should not refrain from our roles and responsibilities as a family just because they have gotten old and we are out of time. It is our duty to pay for their well-being so that they receive the best amenities and care from the nurses. It shows that we still consider them as family and would like to invest our time in them and learn and know the nitty-gritties of it. For instance, we know what our family members needs are and sometimes the nurses in the care home might fail to acknowledge that or it might miss their mind. This could cause a turmoil in the aged member's health. It would be better for the family to be keenly interested into what goes on in their family member's care.
Apart from taking of their financial and health requirements, this situation also helps the family stay in touch with their peers. A scenario like this is quite beneficial for the family in terms of mental and emotional intimacy. It would create a bond of trust and empathy between them and help the peers get through this complex situation easily.
To summarize, taking care of your peers when they become old helps us keep the family values intact and strong and it instills a sense of responsibility among the younger generation of the family instead of disregard.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 648, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'members'' or 'member's'?
Suggestion: members'; member's
... This could cause a turmoil in the aged members health. It would be better for the fami...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, still, well, apart from, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58361774744 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4332149294 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498293515358 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2959466151 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.307692308 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288673585886 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104655056722 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321035857995 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167084515842 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364315247723 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.