Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'.
How true do you think this statement is?
What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars
In this 21st century, it is true that, human beings are used to with their own automobiles and the number of buying cars is extremely accelerating from the last three decades, in most of the metro cities in the world, which are now considered as the 'one big traffic jam'. In this essay, I will discuss about some preventive steps, which ought to be taken by the authors to deal with this issue.
To embark with, presently, it is the dream of all individuals to have their own car for travelling and maximum number of mankind have their personal vehicles, which are used in a daily basis, due to that the problem of traffic jam is faced in the mega citie - it is the issue of debate. In order to solve the issue of heavy traffic, governments have to take some measures : increase the carbon taxes upon private automobiles; rise the price of fuels, which are used in vehicles, both are very helpful to tekal the problem. For an example, one of the european nations - Malta, where author not only put some carbon taxes but also boomed the fuel rate to deal with the problem of traffic in 2015, accordingly, citizens have been trying to less use their personal cars and after that the issue day to day decrease.
Furthermore, there are many another steps to discourage citizens from using their own automobiles, which can be taken by the government. If the author improve some sectors of public transport : better infrastructure; good facilities; frequent routs of buses and trains; decline the price of tickets, these are the improvements, which are fascinating humans to utilise public transportation. For an instance, in Denmark, where there is no traffic congestion in whole country and the least number of cars are used because the public transport is extremely greater vis-á-vis other countries.
To conclude, although, in order to discourage the public from using cars, authors should apply some carbon Taxes upon private vehicles and improvise public transportation by reducing ticket rate, providing often routs and so on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, furthermore, if, so, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92711370262 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66346661912 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548104956268 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.5982252813 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 187.777777778 106.682146367 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.1111111111 20.7667163134 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233064510881 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999514097597 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699093278776 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134323549817 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054815234963 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.0946893788 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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