children are studying with calculators and computers while some argue that they should more with books .Give your opinion
Empowerment of children is utmost important because they are the backbone of the any society.But in this burgeoning era, where technology is growing very fast , so children inclined towards the usage of electronic devices for study.This is a big question books or gadgets?.So, this essay will describe which method is best for education along with my personal opinion
To begin with,students are using electronic devices in order to save time, fast and for more accurate results. For instance in subject like operational research where calculations are in decimals and students prefer calculator where manual calculation is quite tough. Because of this toughness institutes also allow the use of electronics.In addition to this learning through electronic methods is more accessible and illustrative also. BYJU'S is the best example for online learning rather than traditional books. Moreover children bound to use the electronic ways to study because of cost effectiveness.
On the contrary ,it has adverse effects also.First of all electronic instruments is a big constraint for the overall development of the children. They becomes addictive to online games,chatting and modes of entertainment. Although work is done quickly ,but students become more lazy and shirk work.So, they look for easy methods of wok and this also becomes the personality trait of the students .For an instance it has been surveyed by one of the newspaper that ,children are not concentrative and serious towards study because of easy ways of teaching are used by public schools.
As per my perspective,education should be combination of computers and books.Both are required for developing a intelligent and smart personalities who are going to be future of the nation.
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also, but, first, look, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, first of all, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51102941176 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22255232444 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610294117647 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.428130986 49.4020404114 268% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.555555556 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2222222222 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1111111111 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 5.01903807615 817% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171297151488 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605650910141 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429811940404 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971005322638 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318610007818 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.27 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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