essay topics: Many people believe that university students should study a full range of subjects, instead of some specific subjects
University is a place where higher education is imparted to the Students. Children undergo different sort of eligible criteria to avail admission in a reputed university. Universities make a person specialized in Subject. Many people think that different subjects should be taught ,however other people believe that only compulsory subjects should be part of the course. Thus this essay will put light on the on the subject in detail.
To begin with, additional subject like art and craft, personality development and sports subjects should be taught along with the course. These subjects will boost the overall personality of the student. There are different types of quota where students can get jobs while applying and get additional scores. For an instance in government jobs there is separate quota for sports, and games also. Even, in many private organisation not only the qualification which is considered instead of this the communication skills and other curricular activities also.In addition to this ,it will also help the students to obtain preference in this competitive world because course subjects are mandatory and cleared by all the students
On the flip side,extra subjects will a burden on the children rather than an advantage. In the field of technical education and professional education these additional subject does not carry any weightage.For an instance , in the field of medical and engineering .Moreover this would be interruption and mind diversion of the students.
It can be concluded that university education should be combination of compulsory subject and selective subjects according to the preference of the university children.In fact there must be the provision of the additional subject according the stream of the students
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in addition, in fact, sort of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51824817518 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96805248222 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529197080292 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 108.007040666 49.4020404114 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228889252725 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874532630298 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068816676177 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146432742737 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747029214542 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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