Children find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention to their study in school. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?
Students find it hard to focus on subjects in school. The primary reason is the old-fashioned way of teaching subjects which could make it boring and dull to concentrate. We can solve this by introducing the more practical approach of teaching that elevates students' interest in a subject.
A myriad of schools is still following the outdated way of teaching where the focus is mainly on theory and facts which makes it monotonous. Such teaching techniques, emphasis on mugging up and thus, diminish students' interest and attention from the study in school. For instance, a study done by Cambridge University suggests that students perform poorly in the subjects where tutors put more emphasis on learning facts and mugging up. This indicates that the teaching process should be updated to help students concentrate better on subjects.
Certainly, the problem of students paying less attention in class can be solved by introducing more practical based teaching where they are taught about the applications of the subjects and practicals are performed to teach concepts and fundamentals of the subject. This enhances the participation of students as well as help them in understanding the subject better. For example, a study done on school students after introducing a new teaching methodology, it has been found that 53% of students have improved their grades and 38% scored a distinction in their weakest subject.
To conclude, students find it tough to pay attention to their class in school because of an outdated style of teaching, which makes learning uninteresting. Therefore, to resolve this problem, the most viable solution is to instigate a new teaching methodology that gives importance to practicals and student participation in learning.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3381294964 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96975942492 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514388489209 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5622042323 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211352501699 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870638970448 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465197525098 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143294374777 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241207187797 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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