It has been noted that numerous social concerns are related to juveniles. It is argued that this is happening because parents are not able to take care and give enough time to their adolescents. I completely agree with the statement. This essay will discuss firstly that because of spending less time with their kids, parents are not able to inculcate good values in them and secondly, if children are not monitored by their parents regularly, they easily get to indulge in bad activities; followed by a reasonable conclusion.
A myriad of parents, have a hectic schedule due to their professional life and spend less time with their children. Because of this, they are not able to give them good family values which are very important in an individual's life to become a better citizen. Such children usually misbehave with others or create trouble for others. For example, a recent study done by the Cambridge University, in various school across the UK, found out that 90% of the students who were flagged as mischievous or bullies by the school staff, get to spend very little time with their family.
Moreover, when adolescents spend less time with their family, it becomes easier for them to get engaged in bad activities. Teenagers easily get influenced by watching various bad activities around them and they try to mimic the same to look cool and relevant around people. Therefore, if parents are not present most of the time to look after their kids, it becomes easier to adopt wrong habits. To illustrate, a survey done by a big corporate house, suggests that most of the people started smoking when their parents were not with them and that eventually became a habit.
To conclude, I completely agree that several societal issues relate to youngsters because fathers and mothers are not able to provide enough time for their kids and take care of them. Therefore youngsters are growing with a dearth of good family values and indulging in several bad habits.
- The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last 10 years.Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend 73
- Children find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention to their study in school. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem? 67
- A lot of social problems can be related to teenagers these days. Some feel that this is because parents are not able to spend enough time to take care of their teenage child. Do you agree or disagree? 73
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9251497006 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52585504442 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505988023952 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1094839325 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245932671788 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929164513021 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838898039151 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165519602316 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765184455307 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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