City dwellers do not tend to develop close relationship with the neighbours.
Why is this so?
And what can be done to improve contacts between neighbors within cities?
Immediate residents plays a vital role in the day to day life of every individuals from the ancient periods. Humans carry the tendency of depending upon each other for attaining support and companionship to execute their actions such as travelling, playing sports, celebrating family functions etc. However today’s modern world of technical advancement has changed the mindsets of people to start focusing on connecting with machines and devices rather than the local people.
To begin with, we can define that the mentality of people has got its diversions mainly because of their lifestyle changes ie. Moving from countryside to City life. Almost in all the villages people live united and they know each other well, by connecting face to face. In addition it is a real fact that all the children play together, all the elderly people connect with chat sessions together, and even they have the practice of exchanging things among one another. However all this is completely not in sync with the lifestyle of people who are residing in cities, because everyone is engaged with one’s own busy schedule of attending jobs and duties, and majority of the population spends their vast amount of time by travelling and attending offices. People does not even get chances to meet one another face to face for sharing or discussing the general matters. Due to the shortfall of leisure time and advancement of technological devices such as smart phones, televisions, internet, mobile apps and door step deliveries and pick up’s humans tend to forget the necessity of connecting with closely located and related people.
On the other hand, it is important to make humans realize that the communication and relationship with locals creates reality of living. In modern cities the method of apartments (flats) housing brings enormous chances for flat mates to mingle with each other on daily living – by the way of having doors of the houses placed close by, and the building has common areas for playing & organizing get-togethers, gyms, pools etc. Therefore individuals should feel the sense of human touch by meeting and spending time together physically rather than depending upon electrical devises to connect. And few more additional steps can be taken by the localities and associations to make families participate in common activities and get connected with one another inorder to build a good rapport and maintain the same throughout their daily life.
In conclusion, human contacts and relationships are definitely needed for happy living. Families being related as friends mark a long term relationship by supporting and bringing comfort to face the challenges of life as well as for celebrating the happy moments.
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| 2019-05-16 | Sakthi Priya | 92 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, well, as for, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, by the way, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2297.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 439.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23234624146 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76462956884 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580865603645 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 717.3 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.100717122 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.5625 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4375 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114564908624 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393135787731 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319085187796 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674771528373 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316813768446 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.