Completing University education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
While there is a contradiction to atleast become graduate in order to get dream job, number of people think that practical knowledge and getting soft skills creates a brighter path. To be very precise, I opine that it is mandate to be a university graduate at the same time should be learning different skills to excel in competition for jobs.
First of all, it has been noticed that education to a basic level not only gives you the knowledge but also makes you eligible for different kind of jobs. With the increase in the competition, now the merit goes on the basis of basic education. For instance, students going to become advocate they should be law graduate, without the knowledge of it there is no success. At the same time in order to construct buildings engineers should have the knowledge of material used and this is possible when they get bachelors in engineering. Therefore, studying to a level of graduation gives you the confidence to clear the competitive exams and also taking corrective measure in the job.
Most importantly, now there is an increase in demand of quality candidate and employers do not want only expertise instead they look for multitalented employee. Just the degree will not place you to the level of high profile job. Although basic education is necessary but to excel in companies there is a huge demand of soft skills. Those who do not carry dissimilar talents such as people management fails in getting in jobs they are looking for. Moreover, good communication skills are now becoming necessary to compete in jobs interview. For example, BPO’s are in trend giving jobs to scholars 12th pass out on the basis of the communication skills and once they get experienced they are eligible for every kind of job. Thus, soft skills are now as necessary as food to live.
In my opinion, different level of profession requires different skill set so it becomes mandate to study till graduate level, like UPSC aspirants has to knowledgeable. Among all, should be university graduate.
To recapitulate, I would rather say, people management skills and communication skills with practical hands on gives more point to get into excellent job but at the same time necessary education helps to be intelligent in the same area.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean ''?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94764397906 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80436267049 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505235602094 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4696284017 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.176470588 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4705882353 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52941176471 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22266538913 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732917825054 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578990887447 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139070130501 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630037550104 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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