As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.
As we have always heard that the school is a second home for children and teachers are their mentors after parents who guide,support,nurture and mould into a correct direction to make a child a great human being. The role of a teacher in student's life plays an impact throughout their lives. They are considered as conveyance of information. I don't agree that there will be no room for teachers due to the use of a technology. it is true that computers are used more and more in education, that doesn't define the success or guarantee for a career growth of an individual.Computers are just a medium to represent information available,to gather and use knowledge; but to explain the same to students in a most convinient way, no body except teacher can do well.
it is very important for an individual to understand a concept. For example, if a student needs to prepare a model and has to represent the same as a part of their work, they will be able to do it using technology but at a same time, computers doesn't tell them how to present most effectively in front of others.Such confidence of speaking and presenting will come out with the help of teachers only.
I believe that successful educational system should regard numerous psychological programs for their students.I can't agree the role of a teacher in the modern education system considering the presence of a person to select,interpret and convey the proper information from the available one.No matter how advance computers become, there will be no replacement of the human interaction. The only thing is teachers have to be more open minded to adapt changes that are taking places and keep themselves updated and serve as problem solvers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , support
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Suggestion: nobody
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Suggestion: No
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'minded adapting'.
Suggestion: minded adapting
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...s updated and serve as problem solvers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, well, as to, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89003436426 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12661148681 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570446735395 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.20156588 49.4020404114 253% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.111111111 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3333333333 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42444722218 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149746342623 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107312090232 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278186143506 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745882256425 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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