Conducting Sports events such as Olympic or world cup encourage people to live healthy. While some people indicate that there are various other methods to remain healthy. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Although major events like Olympics and World Cup persuade people to adopt healthy lifestyle, many people consider that this is not the only way to stay healthy. I believe that mega sports events promote healthy lifestyle, however, they also involve hefty amounts for arrangements. Therefore, other simple basic ways to keep oneself healthy are way more effective than such major events.
At the one side, people find international sports event very persuading for healthy living because these events have huge impacts on their minds. Many people admire fitness, stamina and success of athletes and sports players, due to which they also aspire to follow a healthy pattern of living so that they could become like them. However, such fancy and fascinating events need a huge setup as well as money to arrange; it is not possible to organize them often. Owing to this reason they can lower down their influence from the minds of people.
On the other side, one school of though believe that the urge to spend a healthy life does not depends only on sports events. Even many nations which have never participated in such events ever, they are more indulged into healthy lifestyle. Japan, for instance, is one of the healthiest and fittest nations in the world whereas it never participated in Olympics. It heavily relies on its centuries-old traditional living which is considered the most organic and Eco-friendly. In this case, sports events are not playing any substantial role so far. Similarly, diet is indispensable part of healthy living. It has not any association with international sports culture while it is purely relevant to one’s own preferences. No matter how many sports events are organised for encouraging people to live healthy, they cannot be fit unless they eat healthy.
In my opinion, while sports can encourage people to become more active and energetic, it is still not adequate to motivate people to exercise a healthy living. If this was the case, people would not watch matches sedentarily in front of TV screens, but would be found in play grounds. Therefore, spending a large amount of money on sports events with a hope of encouraging people to be healthy is unfair, other methods like traditional ways of living and eating should also be taken on board to get better results.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Line 9, column 96, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'depend'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: depend
...e urge to spend a healthy life does not depends only on sports events. Even many nation...
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Line 9, column 96, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'depend'
Suggestion: depend
...e urge to spend a healthy life does not depends only on sports events. Even many nation...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, similarly, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, while, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06510416667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60106064771 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536458333333 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9523292066 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.055555556 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274706961798 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837418593286 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721488993499 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177578166882 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319181234733 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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