Conducting sports event such as Olympics or World Cup encourage people to live healthy, while some people indicate that there are various other methods to remain healthy.
Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Distinct ways to become healthy is increasingly popular. It is often argued that arranging sports event is the only way forward for people to live healthier lives, I think people also have additional options to opt to become fit. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and provide evidence as to why other options are helpful.
To commence with, there are numerous means to opt-in order to become stronger. Firstly, it is generally held notion that people could join health clubs, this is due to the fact that they have qualified trainers which can guide the newcomers properly. In addition to that, most of the clubs have very convenient and flexible timing; therefore, people could take admission in accordance with their availability. A recent article suggests that 70% of jobholders would like to opt for evening classes due to their work commitments. Secondly, it is widely claimed that a healthy diet which includes an appropriate proportion of meat, vegetable, beans, and milk could be another way forward for people to live healthy lives. For example, several studies attest to the fact that a balanced-healthy diet help to prevent diseases consequently, people can stay strong and healthy.
On the other hand, there is a certain persuasive argument in favor of arranging sports event. It is generally claimed that organizing events such as World Cup attract a large audience because of media coverage and international recognition. Due to this, people would give preference to participate in these events to live healthily.
In conclusion, I am of the view that joining health clubs and taking care of balance-diet are the easy ways to become healthy rather than participating in an event which required a unique skill and dedicated time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17361111111 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78517894218 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590277777778 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5003738849 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.615384615 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195644111558 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655268061307 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481199217621 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119513958088 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594894330254 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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