The continued rise in the world population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.
What are the causes of the continued rise?
Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
In today’s world the growing world population is the biggest issue faced by humanity. In my opinion, I believe that the rise in the human population is a great concern for the world as it leads to deforestation and the extinction of natural resources and thus leading to environmental imbalance.
Firstly, one of the main causes of the increased population in the world is the decrease in the mortality rate. As health care is improving day by day, the people live longer and life expectancy rate has increased. In addition, birth mortality has also decreased during the past decades. Thus, the rise in birth rate and a decrease in death rate is the contributing factor towards the increased population in the modern world.
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Overpopulation is a big issue in today’s world and I agree with it. It has led to many environmental problems such as deforestation. To keep up to the demands of housing and providing shelter, many developing countries have adapted deforestation as the tool to cope with it. Consequently, increasing the overall temperatures in the world and hence, the water levels in the sea. This process of global warming will furthermore, reduce the land area and thus, leading to more overcrowding.
Another problem that is caused by an increase in population is the increase in demand for supplies. Despite, large reservoirs of natural resources in the world, such as oil and gas, there is a lack of supplies. As the resources are limited and the consumption is increasing, this impacts the agriculture and health care facilities as well and hence, leading to hunger and many untreated patients.
In conclusion, overpopulation is a great concern for the world and contributing to environmental problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...creased population in the modern world. . Overpopulation is a big issue in today...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12676056338 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12689265554 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1693757928 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164724710563 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545263790281 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519790146642 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086595459605 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565743592207 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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