You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter
• describe the situation
• explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
• say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir/ Madam,
My name is Julie Hickson, one of the students in college, and I am currently sharing a room with another student. I am writing this letter to let you know that I’m not comfortable sharing a room with her anymore. I have tried to accommodate but, due to the recent problem we are facing with each other, it seems difficult.
The main issue is that she invites her friends over, and they stay up late night, i"m not able to sleep properly, and now it shows on my work. They keep on playing loud music, drinking, and even play movies.
It is now becoming a daily habit, and I am not able to cope with it. I have already complained to the local warden, but hardly anything has been done, although the warden gave a warning but did not seem to have helped. Due to lack of sleep and peace of mind, I am continuously distracted at work and thus less productive. Even clecks and staff in at my work have noticed it.
I prefer to have a single room allotted to me, and don't want to share the room with anyone else. I am willing to pay the extra expenses.
I hope you will look into it.
Yours Faithfully,
Julie Hickson.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...writing this letter to let you know that I’m not comfortable sharing a room with ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t problem we are facing with each other, it seems difficult. The main issue i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... It is now becoming a daily habit, and I am not able to cope with it. I have al...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d staff in at my work have noticed it. I prefer to have a single room allotted ...
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Line 9, column 52, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... have a single room allotted to me, and dont want to share the room with anyone else...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... am willing to pay the extra expenses. I hope you will look into it. Yours Fa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, thus, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36744186047 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31971352738 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623255813953 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.463917525773 1509% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.429645225 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2307692308 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238970567733 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777575626797 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832136253998 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121873991435 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110031206653 0.0580467560999 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.