the cost of flying has decreased significantly over the last decade. this has made overseas travel much more accessible .
discuss advantages and disadvantages
The aviation industry has revolutionized the way of travel in last decade by declining the airfares. This reduction in cost of air tickets has come with both merits and demerits. This essay will discuss both in upcoming aisles.
The prominent merit of cheap flying is proliferation of international tourism. In past year, although middle class individuals also want to travel to different nations and comprehend themselves with new culture and traditions, they cannot because of the high cost of traveling. However, now they can as it is affordable. For instance, as per the national tourism report of Dubai, they have entertained 25 percent more tourist once the air fares were reduced by 20 percent. Also, this is imperative for economic growth. In other words, higher number of travelers is directly proportional to higher income of a nation. This is because, when tourists visit a particular country they book hotels, visit museums and local attractions; and for this they spend money on entry tickets and accommodation charges. These pay outs are the income of local businesses and hence for a country.
Nevertheless, the major con of this cost cutting is on environment. Because of the dropped cost of flying, more and more people tend to fly which has aggravated the flight numbers also. It is needless to say that, one flight tour pollute environment at a higher extent because it has been substantiated that pollution spread by a car in a year is equivalent to a single flight journey. Thus, it has more detrimental effects on environment.
To conclude, I have written down both advantages and disadvantages of diminishing airfares. Even though it has adverse effect on environment, which can be alleviated if government invests in the finding of Eco-friendly technology, its positive effects are more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...which has aggravated the flight numbers also. It is needless to say that, one flight...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17288135593 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00047683657 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616949152542 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.2055490511 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7647058824 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196732564625 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597672764651 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436247597479 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115307348476 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446278235039 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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