Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish Why do you think this is happening What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.
Why do you think this is happening?
What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Undoubtedly, the waste around the globe is surging at alarming rate and it has been an indispensable issue which needs to be tackled immediately. While the main causes are inevitable population growth and industrialization, the same can be taken care of if authorities provide proper waste management guidance and recycling methods.

The root cause behind this is and will be the continuous increase in populace and being solid waste a by-product of population, it will surely aggravate with time. To explicate it, there are around 8 billion inhabitants in the world and it is estimated it will cross 10 billion by 2050. Hence, the scientists and environmentalists have predicted the trash will also increase in million tons by then because of this populace rate. Moreover, because of the proliferation of industries, humans have gotten the habit of throw-away culture which means instead of repairing and reusing an old object, people tend to throw them in garbage and buy new. For instance, usages of plastic bags and disposable objects have escalated because humans prefer to use and throw rather than reusing things.

One preventive measure authorities can take to alleviate the burden on environment is by educating the general public about the hazardous impacts of colossal waste collection. Also, campaigns should be arranged to promote reusable bags so that the use of plastic bags can be curbed. Furthermore, state can run advertisements and free classes for people to teach the ways that a household can use to reduce the trash generation. Another step that the government can undertake is through sound recycling. Democrats should invest in technology that can be managed at municipal level to eradicate waste. To exemplify, Singapore government used a technology to stamp out garbage by dumping it in ocean and forming an island through it. Not to mention, it has least garbage percentage in the world. Such innovations are needed to solve this issue.

To conclude, it is a fact the human population will increase so as the solid waste. In order to control this, above mentioned steps need to be followed and adhered by government and public.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, while, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17094017094 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95067306532 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584045584046 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.000078641 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.764705882 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.060485943209 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0212509253997 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0209610252568 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.035255843365 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244228840136 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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