Inform the bank manager in a letter about the fact that you cannot go to an agreed meeting. You should cover the following: - inform and apologize - describe the reason for your absence - propose a new time
Dear sir or Madam,
I am writing to inquire you about the cancelation of pre determined meeting on Monday march 24th. As this is an extremely important conference including our upcoming projects; however, i apologize for becoming absent from the meeting because of certain situations.
The big personal reason for not coming to the group meeting is that on that day i am going to visit my grand parents who were living overseas for many years and it would be a great opportunity for me to meet them and strike conversations. Most important thing is that i have great respect for them in my heart and i can not disappoint them by not meeting them. Also, they are coming to attend the wedding celebration of my elder sister and would return back after a few days.
I sincerely apologize for canceling the significant meeting and i request you to determine an another time. I would definitely be on time and without any reason. I hope you would take my request into consideration. I look forward to hearing from you back.
Yours faithfully,
Sarbjeet kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir or Madam, I am writing to inquire you about the ca...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...cluding our upcoming projects; however, i apologize for becoming absent from the ...
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Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...cause of certain situations. The big personal reason for not coming to the gr...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...o the group meeting is that on that day i am going to visit my grand parents who ...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...i am going to visit my grand parents who were living overseas for many years and ...
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Line 5, column 317, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... great respect for them in my heart and i can not disappoint them by not meeting ...
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Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...elebration of my elder sister and would return back after a few days. I sincerely apolo...
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Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...r canceling the significant meeting and i request you to determine an another tim...
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Line 7, column 92, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a time' or 'another time'.
Suggestion: a time; another time
... meeting and i request you to determine an another time. I would definitely be on time and with...
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Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tely be on time and without any reason. I hope you would take my request into con...
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Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uld take my request into consideration. I look forward to hearing from you back. ...
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Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing from you back. Yours faithfully, Sarbjeet kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79347826087 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76326496564 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646739130435 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1820235036 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220317969524 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870658231452 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584799643098 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153187869687 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522535447381 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.