countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy same product anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development.
It is undeniable that with advancement in the trade system, same commodities are accessible around the world. Hence, nowadays there is negligible differences among nations due to this facility. I Believe it is a welcomed development as it begets benefits in terms of augmenting quality of life and blurring of cultural differences among the world over.
Firstly, ability to purchase similar good from any corner of the world has paved the way for improving life standard. In other words, in third world countries where industries are not well developed product in demand are imported from developed nations with the excellent quality. For instance, Hepatitis C medicine are expensive to manufacture in countries like Ghana and west Africa so antiviral cures are imported from Canada in order to overcome the rapidly raising ailment among people. Consequently, this practice is beneficial in barraging the prevalence of disease among people and eventually health of community is increased.
Secondly, introduction of international market extirpated the differences in culture to some extent because products that are symbol of a specific country like clothes and shoes now available at our door steps. Moreover, Sales and purchase of these products are sky rocketing all over the world because of the adaptability among people. For example, Nike is an American multinational corporation which is expanding its business around the globe and now it is no longer redundant and famous worldwide.
In conclusion, world has become a global village and similar products are available all around the world which extremely beneficial because it eliminate differences among nations and improved their life style.
- Scientists predict that all people will choose to talk the same global language in the future Do you think this is a positive or negative development 61
- Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, However, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
- Some people think that libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them. However, others do not agree.Discuss both sides and give your opinion 73
- More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time.What problems does this cause?What do you think are some possible solution? 67
- Young people are often influenced by their peers Do the advantages of peer pressure outweigh the disadvantages 60
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52091254753 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92318046392 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600760456274 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4342055364 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9090909091 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164537277793 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617878597006 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386181968329 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103892946687 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284309186772 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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