A country's future depends on its young people. Therefore, it is argued that the government should invest heavily in its youth. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued by some individuals that state must spend money in youngsters of the nation because country’s forthcoming hang on them. I agree and believe that presence of younger generation has essential role in various fields and without youth, these fields are incompetent for any nation.
Firstly, youth participation in nations building is essential to grow the nation. There are a plethora of reasons why youth participation is must to build the nation strong. Firstly, in army where youths are required most and without army support no nation can develop self-defense and control their law and order. Secondly, in sports, youngsters are needed most to participate in different games and win games in the name of nation, which bring pride and honor for the country. For instance, Australia is the richest nation in sports because they encourage their children in games participation at very young age.
Secondly, youngsters are considered the backbone of a nation. The economy of a nation and industrial development depends on qualified and trained youngsters. Presence of specialist such as doctors and engineers are highly required in any nation to support the health and industrial sector of a nation. In other words, without these young individuals no nation can stay competent and strong for upcoming generations as these young talent in future will become scientist and work for the development of society in many ways. As per the survey, India and China are most competent nations in the upcoming world and they invest almost 70 percent of its budget in young individuals.
In conclusion, the youth requirement is most in any country because of the above mentioned reasons, therefore, government must invest in young individuals’ to become strong and competent nation in various field.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29065743945 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91104862419 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519031141869 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7890713299 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.615384615 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123541937029 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476100630125 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445424680846 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925951775334 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433408296107 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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