It has been said that a country's development depends on its young people. Therefore, as much as a government invests on its young people, that country would develop more and more in the future. In my opinion, it is true that youth play a significant role in the future of human societies and they can make big processes in the development of the countries, but it is not the only aspect in making a good future for a country. In this essay, we will try to discuss all important features that can have any positive or negative effect on development of a country.
Probably, a well-educated human resource can play a considerable roll in development of a society. Youth are the source of innovation in each community, however, they need different kinds of supports in financial affairs, rules and regulation and so on.
Thus, a dynamic society not only thinks about providing enough human resources as the main engine of development, but politicians of such a society must consider how they can convert this potential source of movement to an actual development process.
Training people from early ages at the school to play positive roles in the society, participating actively in the political structures and elections to build up suitable rules and regulations for a stable of development, encouraging youth to think about the ways that they can make their country and cities a better place for living, all are some examples of how the government can try to plan for a better future for its territory.
In conclusion, it is completely true that young people will make the future of a society, however, it is not entire facts. There are many other affairs that a government must take into account and consider them beside of educating and investing on youth, to be able to have a stable and considerable development in a society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84394904459 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87125711291 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515923566879 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.9620427963 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.1 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183928263681 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864120566652 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845433611676 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934657459755 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747117042696 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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