Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (In words, pictures, music, or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restriction on what they do. To what extent, do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Emancipation from the restriction of the freedom of expression as well as government prohibition which is provided from the individual idea that is crystal clear of public opinion. I am hundred portion agreed above the mention topics sentences freedom of expression.
Creative artist can play pivotal contribution to express their dream, thought, ideology, etc. that bear essential welfare state configuration principles, where met demand as universal path finder strategy. First, expression of innovation may lead any civil society upon their highest stage whatever they chose for their better way. A lucid article, for instance, carton magazine can play at a glance by their respective portrait from society to state taboo, curse and corruption that are shown social discrimination. Second, a renowned film-maker can lift any global discrimination, torture, racism, and social issues whichever is the greatest taboo in our society. Another way newspaper based publication opinion can also provide an opportunity to unveil of all barriers. Third, drawing, painting, graffiti are the most crucial exponent to draw attention while any organ body occurring suspicious activities that hazardous our civil society. An ideal artist should play historical real enthusiastic for social services orientation way.
On the other hand, government governing body wanted to protect such kind of ideal activities for their evil purposes implementation at any cost. To hide and play is the greatest turbulent point view that bears ruling party’s illegal supportive activity, here such kinds of activities disclosed by prominent artists throwing their criticism. I contrast real scenario of the power holder executive body they are the essential parts of the government; they do not disclose such kinds of jobs so it may control over the vital artists for their supportive way. Although, the ruling power body tried to control under their strict rules and regulations.
To sum up, government should follow services oriented rules that come down a tranquil situation in order to create welfare civil society as well as an ideal artist whose may play essential giant steps task that helps to the authority making refresh and ever green society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 612, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'issues'' or 'issue's'?
Suggestion: issues'; issue's
...rimination, torture, racism, and social issues whichever is the greatest taboo in our ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, third, thus, well, while, for instance, kind of, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5306122449 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80966381361 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623906705539 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8832676751 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.466666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178098269443 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574651321764 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425864630956 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999047644316 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272010241174 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.