Crime is a problem all over the world and there is nothing can be done to prevent it.
Do you agree or disagree?
Some school of thoughts deem that people cannot do anything to diminish felony which is a global issue. This essay disagrees with the statement because it could be untangled by imposing strict laws as well as by rendering employment.
On the one hand, it is argued by many people that it is impossible to curb crime because they think that mindset of criminals cannot be changed. That is to say that, law-breakers are unwilling to adopt changes which are taught to them. Consequently, rules will be infringed by perpetrators incessantly as they believe that it is the only way to live life. For example, in Pakistan, numerous rehabilitation centres are run by government to prevent crime, however, authority has failed to get desirable ramifications. Therefore, the argument is justifiable that felony cannot be stopped by any measures.
On the other hand, crime could be curtailed by taking several precautions. Firstly, stricter rules should be imposed by states to prevent violation of laws. As a result, offender will be discouraged to commit crime due to fear of punishment. To exemplify, Saudi Arabia has implemented strong laws which must be followed by their citizens. Therefore, crime rate in Saudi Arabia is lower as compared to other nations. Secondly, as rudimentary cause behind most of the crimes is monetary crisis, it would be decreased by providing ample of job opportunities; so that, no one could commit crime due to dearth of money. Thus, crime could be prevented by considering above mentioned factors.
In conclusion, though, criminal’s way of thinking cannot be altered, felony could be eradicated by establishing strict punishments as well as by providing jobs to offenders. Furthermore, it is recommended that rather than focusing on crime, authorities should try to find the root cause of the same
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 387, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...re, crime rate in Saudi Arabia is lower as compared to other nations. Secondly, as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20945945946 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04557391191 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574324324324 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.116392471 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.375 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6875 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18533944144 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639167997001 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333784304987 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105877402021 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399474389444 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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