Crime rate against women is increasing day by day. What are the reasons for this? Discuss some possible solutions for dealing with this problem.
The extent of crimes on women are expanding quite rapidly in today's world. Most of the newspapers are filled with these atrocious and sinful acts by some of the disturbed individuals. This essay will discuss the reason behind this and suggest a viable solution.
To commence with, the prime reason for an inflation in crime rate against women is that the men perceive a lonely woman as an easy target. Also, larger part of women population is unable to defend single-handedly against these type of youngsters. As a result, criminals take advantage and eventually prey these girls under appropriate conditions. For example, data released by FBI proved that the women who usually travel alone to work or school have been criminally targeted twice as compared to girls who commute with a companion.
One of the solution to this worrying problem is that employers should assign a designated driver to these lady employees who ride alone during night. Additionally, the security levels should need to be tighten by the police for these women, especially around crime impacted areas. For instance, New Delhi Police in 2017 have deputed an undercover policeman on platforms after a series of numerous crimes on these train stations which had significantly reduced the crime volume.
In summary, one of the main causes of a crime growth is the inability of a victim to protect themselves against extra powerful and stronger men. This can be solved by employers who can provide an additional cover to late working females to ensure the safety of their workers. It is predicted that the crime rate against women can be alleviated with an increased layer of security.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...with these atrocious and sinful acts by some of the disturbed individuals. This essay will ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, for instance, in summary, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05818181818 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67373883146 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610909090909 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5314678433 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309794138804 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10084011261 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650155310797 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176287866435 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244892852294 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.