These days, the customs of nations are becoming increasingly similar to the former. The influence of art and food can be the main reasons behind this issue. From my point of view, globalization is an adverse phenomenon for the countries.
To commence, art, such as music may play a vital role in globalization. It is the most open thing among the nations so that people participate in art events or concerts without any restriction. Consequently, the people might attract by other countries art and can carry them to their hometown. Another main cause of why cultures of countries are becoming similar can be the food. In other words, food is a basic necessity for humans, thus people may eat traditional meals from their visiting country when they are travelling overseas. As a result, the person who travelled around and ate cuisines of other nations may tend to cook, perhaps sell these meals in own nation.
From my point of view, however, this development is unfavourable for certain nations, especially developing and poorer countries. First of all, globalization may result in the disappearance of culture for developing and undeveloped countries. The language and the customs can be replaced by developed countries cultures. For example, one recent study showed that almost 20 undeveloped countries languages and traditional values are disappeared because of globalization. Moreover, it has the disadvantage of destroying the developing countries. To illustrate, the people of poorer nations may be desiring to go to wealthy countries because they may think that other countries cultures are far more than their own culture.
To conclude, the main reasons for globalization can be art and meals. However, in my opinion, this is a negative development for countries involving underdeveloped nations.
- Cultures in different countries are more similar today than they used to be What are the reasons for this Is this a positive or negative development 73
- Shopping has become a favorite pastime among young people Why do you think it is like that and do you think they must be encouraged to do other things rather than shopping
- Despite of better access to education why adults are not able to read or write How government can help in the scenario 61
- These days many of us prefer to throw damaged things away whereas in the past people used to repair damaged items and keep them for a long time Explain why you think this change has happened What are the effects of this change in attitude 67
- Experts say that if older people exercise daily they will be healthier and happier However many still suffer from a lack of fitness What are the reasons for this What actions can be taken to solve this problem 61
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34146341463 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07319048403 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529616724739 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5718795227 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1764705882 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82352941176 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288669749483 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952242329033 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735955628143 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197708791854 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818264011718 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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