Despite health warning, a large number of people continue to smoke all over the world,
why should we be concerned about this?
what solution would you suggest.
On each and every cigarette packet it is clearly mentioned that smoking is injuries for health or smoker die younger. Despite all of this warning ample number of people continue the smoke around the globe. For a healthy generation and environment we should have to take some steps for the smoke free culture. What I believe government should have to take necessary measurement to reduce it, even though they can not completely finis it but some how can reduce it.
To overcome this issue various steps can be take, firstly government should have to banned on cigarette advertisement instead of this government should have to run awareness campaign and the disadvantage of the cigarette,
Secondly they should impose a heavy fine if any smoker smoke in public area, office and parks. To do so we cannot reach on zero level but we can reduce a little bit.
Government sped lot of their budget on the different dieses due to the cause of smoking, I think this should to be spend on the awareness compagian.
Further more government should have to banned the smoking center near around the school and mosque area. Same like in saudia Arabia. More over they should have to increase the rates and duty on the cigarette as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81132075472 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47653638517 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589622641509 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.4210319735 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216496691619 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879570884278 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739084136778 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110057084278 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438354768119 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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