In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations.
The aged population has indeed become a serious issue for many industrialized countries around the world. Since there will exert several harmful effects on the lives of individuals and societies, The government needs to take steps to mitigate these potential problems.
Based on the current situation, the community has to face up to two primary problems. First, It will put a heavy burden on youngsters. Because of their age, Old people no longer pay tax while claiming pension benefits from the government. Due to this, Youngsters, in addition to being responsible for taking care of them, they have to work harder to make up for the lost money of the state. Moreover, from the social viewpoint, This would make a lack of workers in the working ages. The more increasing average life expectancy is, the more decreasing fertility rates are. Because of the absence of young workforces, the economy can’t develop at a fast pace especially in this technology-driven ward.
Since such issues are serious, the government should take steps immediately to address these problems. First, the immigration of young people of working age should be encouraged. For example, in Japan, they ease immigration rules for workers. Therefore, they can immediate expansion of the workforce and have the world's leading developed economy. Furthermore, the government should also increase the retirement age. Thanks to medical technologies, many elderly people having good health condition can go back to work. This would benefit from the expertise and experience of the old and reduce the burden on government spending.
In conclusion, although the increase in life expectancy has many detrimental impacts on individuals as well as society, governments already have been eligible to deal with these potential problems
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35211267606 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91196970213 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616197183099 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3284707284 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4117647059 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233022357384 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645157285046 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453793311974 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13820645249 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016524375527 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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