Development in technology make our life complex, and we should try to simplify our life and stay away from these development. To what extend do you agree?
The evolution in technology has a prominently visible impact on the way we live in today's daily life. The handful of people argue that this has taken the simplicity of life away and hence everyone should avoid the use of these developments. Personally, I completely disagree with this assertion and moreover, staying away from technological advancement will keep us extremely busy with plenty of household activities with no time to enjoy.
The technological advance has a great share in making our household life simple and easy. A plenty of home appliances available in the market, for examples washing machine, mixer, and grinder, have a capability to complete any complicated task at the touch of a button. Such innovations are the result of the development of technology that has relived the life of all age groups from kids to elderly people. It means, spending less time on chores gives us an opportunity to spend more time to enjoy with our loved ones.
Communication sector is also unbelievably changed as technology came up with numerous advanced products and gizmos, benefiting people globally. In the past, communicating with people staying a couple of minutes away from home was extremely tedious activity. But, technology has created a platform to connect with anyone, regardless of physical miles. This move has brought the world close by, looking like a global village and hence welcome.
Automobile industry and commercial sector also climbed the ladder of multiple discoveries in their respective domain by using various technological innovations. This has made commuting and shopping for people comfortable and convenient, saving a lot of time on travel.
In conclusion, in the process of simplifying life by staying away from technological development will make our life more and more complex. Hence, instead of giving up on the technical advance, we need to draw the line to take maximum benefits of technology, minimizing its harmful effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29617834395 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97768656964 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608280254777 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0571711513 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.866666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292548982581 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960160867659 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116389929042 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157425605274 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107085435182 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.