The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The following is a diagram that shows how ethanol fuel is produced from a simple crop, that is corn. It is a detailed diagram that makes it easier to underdstand how this fuel is produced and the various procedures and steps taken to produce this particular fuel.
Firstly, the process begins with the growth of corn. It is then stored, following by milling the corn carefully. Moving further, water is then used to cook this particular crop, for about four hours. After it has been cooked for such a long period, a longer process follows, which is called Fermenting. This particular process takes about fourty eight hours.
Then, a very interesting process is followed which is the separation of the liquid and the solid by product after the fermentation has taken place. Ethanol is then finally purified for five hours straight.
It is then stored and later finally transported to the particular destination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 41.998997996 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 1615.20841683 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 153.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01307189542 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61137081827 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 176.041082164 48% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 506.74238477 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8179304144 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142288564784 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621137528494 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101141550131 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851411170958 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121648306327 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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