Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
Some people believe that students should enhance their knowledge only specific to one subject because doing so allows them easily and quickly master in one skill set. However, in my opinion, I do not agree with that stance and think that having skills into multiple subjects for students is essential in the 21st century for the following three reasons.
First of all, knowing deep aspects and concepts for multiple academic subjects are integral part of students's life because it develops better chances of getting job opportunities after completing academic's studies. For example, when a students in college only studies to one subject like English, they will get very limited jobs like into writing ,teaching or may be into blog writing which are also not sure to have great success in number of opening positions. In contrast, if students who have studied science, biology and Arts, they have greater chance of getting into any sector that can be into medical , engineering or into music and art. This will lead to further success down the line and ensure that student are able to live secured life.
Secondly, better expertise into multiple subjects assured the better growth options in job aspects whereas if students limited to one subject boundaries to its knowledge into one field. For instance, engineer who have hand on to multiple coding language like C++, python and Java, which have better option for enhance its skill into new technologies which are parent from previous known languages. In other hand, student who are specific to one language limits its growth to specific to one line of job .
In conclusion, because knowing deep concepts and facts engender secured future and also produces better growth respective to job. It is my contention that they emphasized over one subject.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... get very limited jobs like into writing ,teaching or may be into blog writing whi...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...into any sector that can be into medical , engineering or into music and art. This...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ts growth to specific to one line of job . In conclusion, because knowing deep co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10508474576 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40527088449 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579661016949 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.3478237873 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.909090909 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0909090909 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254172921889 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108006148864 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692476398396 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168000379283 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653666960222 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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