Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.
Mentality and behavior of a child is like a pot and parents and teachers are potters that mold their life for their betterment. Hence, I totally agree with the argument of doing entertaining activities with new generation can flourish better skills and creativity in them as compared to reading.
There is no doubt that learning new things is exciting. However, the ways used to teach those things are important for example, kindergartens in UK organize trips to zoo and botanical gardens to educate preschoolers about flowers, plants and animals. Therefore, tutors and parents have to be creative to develop same skills in their off springs. Consequently, reading is also an essential part of curriculum as it teaches you about language, vocabulary and also improves speaking skills. Although, forcing a child to read can develop a tedious behavior towards studies. Meanwhile, if this reading being convert into stories along some colorful pictures can make this absorbing and helps in developing child's imagination power.
Furthermore, extra curricular activities like playing, dancing, crafting, sports and many more connects child emotionally and build their self confidence. All studies and researches done on child's mental development have every time proved that students who often participate in entertainment activities are more active, alert, independent and a great leaders as compared active readers. For example, youngsters participating in a group dance competition develops expectancy co-ordination, co-operation and team work. Their confidence rises and reduces stage fear.
In conclusion, Reading can be made a daytime activity but with the twist of fun hobbies which helps in developing creational and mental ability of children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 489, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lary and also improves speaking skills. Although, forcing a child to read can develop a ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'leader'?
Suggestion: leader
... active, alert, independent and a great leaders as compared active readers. For example...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62641509434 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98581910027 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679245283019 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1210421133 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.692307692 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264614810741 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793314242785 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708264230466 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150504251309 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404448488835 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.