Due the advancement in computer technology the trend of working from home will bring a dramatic change to people’s lives. Is it a positive or negative development?
Give your opinion and examples.
technology has certainly revolutionized the way we work. Nowadays, with the expansion of technology, it is possible for people to work from home. Although some individuals regard this as a negative trend, I think they can benefit from flexible working hours, which is highly beneficial for our environment.
Hand full of people are of the opinion that employees who work from home are deprived of useful communication with their colleagues. they think, if employees encounter predicaments in their work they do not have instant access to co-workers who can help them to solve their problems. It is asserted that since people do not have team work, they cannot gain sufficient knowledge or experience from their peers. But I really disagree with their beliefs because they can have some virtual communications in order to share their knowledge and experience or even surf the Internet to boost their knowledge.
Nevertheless, working from home provides employees with flexible working hours which is necessary for their work-life balance. it is evident that they can devise a scheme for their leisure time and spend it how they intend. To illustrate, working mothers can spend some quality time with their children which can reduce their concerns. Thus, people working from home are more likely to enjoy their work and life both.
Moreover, from environmental perspective working from home is an environmentally friendly way of work which can prevent our nature from air pollution. it is believed that as a result of reducing commuting by working from home, car emission will be decreased and the weather will become healthier. Undoubtedly, the less commuting, which causes irreparable damage to environment, we have specifically in congested city, the more pleasant weather we can have.
In conclusion, some people would rather work at their office than work from home, so as to, benefit from team working advantages, however, I feel strongly that working from home can be the only way of work for having cleaner environment and work-life balance. I take the view that it is high time people were informed about these positive effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, thus, as to, i feel, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22608695652 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80209961187 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536231884058 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4993421007 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.6875 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209930183263 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945882492165 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653178213501 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147625376551 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444025958088 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.