In many countries the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations
high standards of living and low birth rate lead to increasing life expectancy in the not too distant future in some countries. For this reason, the aging population is on the rise. I am a firm believer that this trend has positive and adverse effects.
On the other hand, From the social perspective, the elderly have positive effects on the young generation. Since they are highly experienced, they can help in some sectors of society, such as management, education or even in politics. Furthermore, not only can the aged population have immense impacts on the society, but also valuable experience has been passed from this generation to the younger one. Thus, the more aged population one community has, the more precious experience society specifically the youth can benefit from.
Conversely, the increasing number of older adults may cause financial crisis for governments in the long term. Due to the fact that government are responsible for providing dwellers with basic needs and wants such as healthcare system, accommodation and retirement, if society encounter aging population, government have no choice but to spend a sizable amount of money for these vulnerable population. take public transport as the most patently example, government in aging society are obliged to allocate more money for paying pensions and boosting healthcare system instead of improving public transport infrastructure, leading to economic recession. Research findings confirm that in these circumstances government are more likely to encounter persistent predicaments, so as to manage budget fairly.
In conclusion, however the growth of old population leads to financial issues in society, citizens can benefit from their experience. I take the view that it is high time the governments took this new phenomenon into consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56890459364 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02144317426 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614840989399 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6607130853 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.230769231 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155041694907 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582983202803 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538785448554 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883028350758 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295365932467 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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