Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business bring about the death of local communities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
most of the main cities in different nations have become overloaded by a plethora of factories and big companies. this indeed makes huge difficulties for local people. As it leads for too much traffic congestions and pollution. therefore, they argue that the best way to minimize such issue is by relocating those industries and firms outside the downtown. this essay aims to explore the benefits and drawbacks of such an action in further detail before coming to a conclusion.
To begin with, there is no doubt that most of the people prefer to work and live inside the main cities. since, they will be surrounded by various significant centers such as hospitals, shopping malls, schools and more. Moreover, they will save a lot of times, money and effort if they work and dwell in the same place. As, the maximum distance that might be spent during their day will extremely lower than if their work our residential outside the main town.
In contrast, it’s irrefutable that the main cause of traffic congestion in several well known cities is the overpopulation of workers and residents. Cairo for example is the capital city of egypt, most of the factories and companies were opining in the city center and causing a massive traffic problem and over pressure on the public transport. Furthermore, the cost of houses and flats were very high due to the increasing of population there. The Egyptian government however, established another city called New egypt which is far from the downtown almost 45 Km and constructed most the of governmental offices, private companies, and factories. In a result, the cost of living over there has alleviate conspicuously which make the life more affordable for most of their citizens. In addition, relocating factories and companies will play an instrumental role in decreasing the pollution in the city. Syria as an example is considered as a very bad nation to live. since it’s over occupied by plenty of industries that have a dangerous emission which affect people life. therefore, lots of global reports have shown the increase of cancer disease among Syrian people due to unpleasant environment.
To sum up, I believe that the advantages of switching factories and companies into another well prepared area outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in contrast, no doubt, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12765957447 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80447808498 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585106382979 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9408345349 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.473684211 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7894736842 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.10526315789 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.031736401196 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0109282084277 0.084324248473 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.022882228026 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.016220996744 0.151304729494 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0126483816196 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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