Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Many small, local businesses are being closed, owing to a boom in large supermarket around the world, and, according to some this will have dire consequences on local communities. In my opinion, although small businesses will suffer to some extent, it is doubtful that it will cause death of local communities.
Admittedly, to certain extent supermarket provides better options for daily needs as compared to regional shops. In other words, supermarket is one place to get all the required things with different varieties, and, with international options to choose from. For example, brands like McCains are available in the supermarket which is hardly available in the shops available in the community. Moreover, local shops cannot offer goods at price competitive to large markets, as they have limitations in terms of price negotiation and adequate storage space. This makes small business suffer as more and more people visiting supermarket thinking of getting better options and at reasonable price.
On the other hand, an assumption that local shops and communities would die, is certainly wrong. Firstly, there are shops which provides high quality products and have set of customers to buy it. For example, in India, still it is tradition to buy gold from local goldsmith, who is serving their family from ages, as they trust them and in return goldsmith ensures them to give quality gold. Secondly, although, supermarket have variety of options, one would not visit it for one or two items or goods. In other words, local communities still rely on local shops to get things required in emergency, as such shops are easy to approach and are located in close vicinity of their stay.
In conclusion, although supermarket provides better options to the communities, still local shops acts as one stop solution when it comes to quality or in case of dire need.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14426229508 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70678723294 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537704918033 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9088939763 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.692307692 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25848614534 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982657299926 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107960557065 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182230906876 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139990172907 0.056905535591 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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