Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to a music concert. Please say:
– Where and when does the concert start?
– What type of music will be played there?
– Why do you think your friend will enjoy it?
Dear Jot,
Hey! How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this to invite you to the concert which is going to unfold in my city.
I know you are a big admirer of Parmish Verma and you always want to see him signing live and now it is the time. Actually, the city always celebrates Rose Fest in February, and different celebrities and signers are invited to give their performance. His live performance will be on 28th February, Saturday.
As per the schedule, he will be on the stage for one hour and sing his songs. There will a game also where everyone has to write his famous song that one wants to listen to from him at the concert, then slips will be collected by the staff, and the signer will pick five slips and sign those songs.
I am sure that you will enjoy it because you are his big fan. I have arranged passes for us so that we need not stand in the crowd and you can easily see him in front of you. I will be waiting for you. Write me down when you will be coming.
Best Wishes,
Kinu
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-05-21 | HARANMOL SINGH | 73 | view |
| 2020-05-02 | kjot_59 | 73 | view |
- Throughout history male leaders have led us into violence and conflict If a society is governed by female leaders it will be more peaceful To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 84
- Fewer schools are requiring children to learn and improve their handwriting skills Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this trend 61
- Some people think that you can never become fluent in language unless you have spent time living or working in that country To what extent do you agree 67
- Many feel that students today should learn practical skills at school such as car maintenance and managing a bank account To what extent do you agree or disagree Many feel that students today should learn practical skills at school such as car maintenance 73
- Your children go to a local school that requires volunteers to accompany school science trips Write a letter to the school to apply to be a volunteer In the letter Introduce yourself and give details of your children who attend the school Explain why you 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t which is going to unfold in my city. I know you are a big admirer of Parmish V...
^
Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...you can easily see him in front of you. I will be waiting for you. Write me down ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, so, then, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.11940298507 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06809643053 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616915422886 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7981773117 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.6923076923 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4615384615 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261359206636 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984290026754 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646189568236 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156259266246 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445811760036 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.32 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.5 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.