Earlier, people wore clothes which were related to their culture. But now, people wear same type of clothes all over the world. Is this a positive development or negative development?
Nowadays, Thanks to latest technologies and inventions different countries of the world can stay connected with each other moreover could exchange heritage culture of one another as the result we can see, People wear the same type of clothes around globe since earlier,People wore clothes which were related to their culture only. It make great impact on human beings who are millions of mile away from each other.
on one side, We could take this approach as positive development because it indicates modernization of our society who not only share their ideas and business but also adopt diverse culture of other folks. However solely it become fashion sense and specially all the youth love to follow the fashion which is trending in world. by this way people could stay connected with different people and their culture so we can say this development is positive for it;s global recognition.
On other side, There are also some cones of this development to prove it negative for man kind. Individuals specially youth tend to wear modern clothes like others although they are going away from their own culture and tradition. As we all know that each and every nation has its own culture,tradition and special cloths for different occasions but due to modernization in clothing dragging them far from their unique style or it may possible too that they forget their own culture and in my opinion, This is negative development for future generation.
If anything which has both pros and cones than people should accept it in moderation. Moderate use and proper understanding is best way to avoid future consequences and could save individual's proud heritage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17883211679 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6965666273 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591240875912 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.4791975272 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.9 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372872694697 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123532125401 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932995452805 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194634143535 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788325024287 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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