early retirement
In the modern era, everyone is working really hard to earn as much money as he or she can to finally be appeased at retirement. We have heard many people saying that they will go on a world tour after retirement. This is the age when they start getting a regular monthly income without having to go to the work termed as the pension.
Usually, the standard retirement age is 65 for everybody, no matter what their field of work is. I concur with the thought that the retirement age should not be the same for everyone. Let's take an example of a person who works in coal mines. He is subjected to harmful gases, impure air, unknown impurities in the mine throughout the duration of his work life. This leads to a significant fall in his health at a very early age. He should definitely be given an early exit in the form of retirement to live a peaceful life ahead. Similar to my example stated above, there are many hazardous jobs that should be given the benefit of an early retirement.
After speaking about the jobs that cause physical fatigue, there are many jobs that require a skilled mind and the ability to work in a stressed out environment 24*7. Such jobs are the white collar jobs like the stockbroker who needs to be always on his toes to gain profit from the market, software professionals who are always beaten up by the unreasonable tight deadlines of their clients.
To recapitulate, just like athletes whose career lifespan is limited until their mid-thirties, other professionals should also retire early from their careers and live a happy retired life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, really, so, speaking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67025089606 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57032484378 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598566308244 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5455175833 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.230769231 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228188550404 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080740273783 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101159292113 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136052916432 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136253973302 0.056905535591 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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