The economy is a vital point to measure a country’s progress. It is considered that the economically stabled countries are the most successful nations in the world. However, a country’s success cannot be measured only by its economic progress. There are also other factors that should be taken into consideration. The following essay would be discussed the main factors to measure the success of a country.
Firstly, the economic progress of a country make the government as well as the people wealthier. As such, the country’s infrastructure and the other necessities will be much advanced. Thus, a prosperous nation will create. Moreover, having a progressive economy will lead many up-coming investing opportunities in the country. This will make people financially stabled and will create a powerful nation.
However, having a progressive economy in the country does not mean it is a successful country. There are also other vital factors that should be discussed secondly. Although the country is economically stabled, without having a proper education system will create people useless. A proper educational system should be imposed by the government to create many educated people and to serve the country in a better way. Not having a proper educational system might be a reason of not inventing new things and most of the necessities will have to import from other countries with restrictions. Ultimately all the consuming products will be made in other countries. Furthermore, a proper medical system should be established in the country. Not having proper medical facilities in the country will lead many people sick and that may affect the country’s development. An advanced medical system in the country will make people strong and that could lead the country’s development effectively.
In conclusion, to make a prosperous and a successful country, both education and health care facilities are equally important while the economic progress should be considered as a significant factor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: There are other; There are also
...es not mean it is a successful country. There are also other vital factors that should be discussed ...
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Line 5, column 765, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'facility'?
Suggestion: facility
...he country. Not having a proper medical facilities in the country will lead many people si...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43037974684 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05689650584 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433544303797 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0956870808 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298938869767 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113026854232 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727586081763 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218906050652 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822648100576 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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