Employers of labour should pay attention to personal qualities over qualifications and experience when making a choice of who to give a job offer. In my opinion, I partially agree and disagree that the focus should be on personal attributes instead of the level of experience.
On the one hand, when a head of a company offers a job to a person based on their personal quality, it will encourage confidence, and the employer would see the employee as trustworthy. My brother in-law, for Instance, is a team player, so this made me offer him employment to manage my cleaning service. Similarly, a super eagles player named "Shittu" got the defensive spot because of his body stature, and not because he was a very talented player. Clearly, the qualities of a person can make them gain employment or a spot in any establishment.
On the other hand, qualifications and experience are expedient when a boss wants to give a job to a professional. This is because the qualifications will give the individual people an advantage over others, and this will make them stand out. To exemplify, if a company wants to employ a doctor, they will make sure that this person has the right qualifications which are needed for the job. Therefore, Jobs will be designated to people as long as they qualify for the position.
To conclude, the attributes a person has will make them a preferable option for an employer, but their experiences or qualifications will keep them steps ahead when it comes to employing them
- The street where you live is very polluted Write to the local council and ask to act about this situation You should say What is the main problem How does it affect your street Give some suggestions and request action 61
- Many young people who leave school hold a negative attitude towards learning Why does this happen What are the solutions money problem earn more money addictions of drugs and alcohols 61
- Some people think students in primary school secondary school should be taught how to manage money because it is an important life skill Do you agree or disagree 67
- Write a letter to your manager about a computer system problem that you have encountered and say Describe the problem How it is affecting your work What needs to be done about it 73
- Many young people who leave school hold a negative attitude towards learning Why does this happen What are the solutions money problem earn more money addictions of drugs and alcohols 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: ABOUT_WHO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'of whom to'?
Suggestion: of whom to
...ons and experience when making a choice of who to give a job offer. In my opinion, I part...
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Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: brother-in-law
...uld see the employee as trustworthy. My brother in-law, for Instance, is a team player, so thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, therefore, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88372093023 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11358786953 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546511627907 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8418094091 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.545454545 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315372896898 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131116019724 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857064890543 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21354035967 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104204742831 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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