The environment problem facing today's world are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. Government and large companies should responsible for the deducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that government and large firms should play vital roles to mitigate the environment issues because the number of problems are mostly created by them comparing to individuals. This essay agrees that the administration and large corporations should make coordinated efforts to curb the global environmental deterioration. Firstly, this essay will discuss the fact that government should arrange awareness campaigns and implement the laws against the organisations who is polluting the nature and secondly, discuss how the awareness campaigns and regulation will alleviate the environment problems.
On the one hand, the environmental pollution occurred by the human activities is a burning issue in the world and the causes of this is the negligence and carelessness of some senseless and imprudent people. Most of us including government officials and myriads firms are not conscious and aware of taking proper steps and measures to alleviate it from the natural world. So governments should address the problems shortly and raise awareness campaigns among the community. For instance, administration could broadcast the programs on the cause and effect of it by the help of mass media. Sanitation campaign is the prime example in Bangladesh, how the proper sanitation facilities could minimize the communicable diseases.
On the other hand, all of us should realize that the damaging impact of it is acute, it spoils and crushes the peace and happiness of our life and demolishes the normal way of our livelihood. From the government perspective, an environmental-friendly law must be imposed and implemented to cut down the contamination occurred by the large companies. For instance, the authority should encourage the firms abiding by the law such as green taxes on fossil fuel to use the alternative energy sources and organic products instead of consuming fossil fuel resulting pollution, chemical pesticides leading to destroy the ecological balance. Iceland is the prime example, where geothermal energy is used for heating system, over 73% of electricity is generated by hydro power.
In conclusion, awareness campaigns and imposing laws could protect our nature from the man-made problems because of good precedent set by the proper sanitation campaign and tariffs on fossil fuel reducing the pollution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1983.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53910614525 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12828835134 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54469273743 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.8668102217 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.538461538 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5384615385 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157944878876 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577310747493 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402802466213 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884450192657 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042112969591 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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